This is a story of a girl who is ultimately trapped in an abusive relationship with a trust fund baby, too good for everybody else, type guy.  They get into a really heated argument and she ends up throwing the engagement ring off her finger and taking off.  She is essentially left with nothing, but she at least has her freedom.  I really enjoyed the use of the side character.  I think it was really important to the story that the worker had such a vital role even though he didn’t say much.  I also really loved how tense the story was throughout the entire time.  I don’t have much as far as suggestions go, other than possibly to incorporate some sort of commotion as she is leaving.  I found it a little unrealistic that nobody except that one man noticed.