This may be my favorite story to date. This is a story about a woman who is kind of part of an anti gang, gang. Hired by the FBI, called the Shadows. She has a girlfriend named Penny who is the most pure human and a preschool teacher. They were having dinner together at a bar, when they got surrounded by a gang. Reyes told Penny that she should go home, so she did. Reyes ended up having to kill 5 men, then ran out of bullets to kill the sixth one, after she missed her last shot. Penny ends up coming back and killing the last one, saving Reyes, and Reyes asks her to marry her. I absolutely love the ending. The little bits of humor sprinkled in right at the end really brought the whole story together. It was action packed, I read it so unbelievably fast because I needed to know what was going to happen next. I think everything was worded really well and the voice stayed consistent throughout. I don’t have many suggestions or recommendations, other than to possibly have a little bit more context as to who this specific rival gang is. But I also don’t feel that that is entirely necessary. Overall, I really loved this story, amazing job!
