This is a love story about two 25 year olds that meet at a club. They spark a connection right off the bat, but are pulled in opposite directions before they can exchange phone numbers. The next day they random;y run into each other at a coffee shop where they exchange information. They go on 2 dates and then label themselves as a couple. I think this story is very sweet. It’s one of those feel-good romances that just has you in a constant state of simple giddiness. The way in which everything happened felt like a typical fairytale ending, and was overall just a really upbeat, happy story. My only questions really revolve around the believability of everything. It all seems too good to be true, and it takes me out of the story. There was never really any conflict other than Jay being nervous, or him not getting her number, but that is resolved within two pages. I really liked the story, I just felt like I wanted something more to happen rather than the entire plot being perfect.
