This story is about a woman who is dying of cancer and a man who is very close with her. They are both filmmakers. Her dying wish is to make a movie. The story is then a telling of the way that they met, but the best part about it is that the story is the actual movie that was the girl’s dying wish. I LOVED the ending. The plot twist of the story literally being the movie that was mentioned in the beginning gave me chills. It was unbelievably creative and something I have never seen before. It was really well done. I don’t have any questions per se. My only suggestions really rely on the repetition of words near the end. There is one instance where you say the word “hospital” 4 times in the matter of 4 sentences, and then say “reaches” twice in the same sentence. I found that it felt choppy, and sort of had me stumbling over my words. Other than that though, I absolutely loved it and I’m really excited to see where you go with the artist book.
