This is a very emotional story about a woman who goes to visit her old home 10 months after finding her husband when he commit suicide. She finally finds his suicide letter, which she had not known of for the past 10 months. She is then provided with some much needed closure. I really loved this story. It was written in such a way that it made me cry. You did a really good job of portraying the emotion of the characters as well as painting a beautiful picture of all of the flashbacks. Everything pieced together in a really wonderful way. My only question is really why he went to this length, which is also something that the narrator doesn’t completely know either. Were there signs of him struggling before that? I feel like that could be an interesting and helpful thing to maybe include a little bit of. Overall you did a really good job, and I really enjoyed this story.
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