This is a story about two girls who run away from home.  They end up in New York, where they cut their hair and are planning on starting their new journey.  I really liked how the characters both interacted with each other.  It felt really natural and believable.  I also really enjoyed the light hearted ending.  It was a really cute bonding moment between the two girls.  My questions mainly rely around their motives.  Why are they running away?  But also, where do they go from here?  Realistically, they are going to screw up, so what happens then?  But my main confusion lies around what happened that was so awful that they decided to run away?  I don’t have much to add as far as suggestions go, other than to provide some context as to why this is happening and who they are as people.