This story is a heartbreaking love story about two young people with a love so beautiful and so strong. The girl gets cancer and quickly begins to fade. Their whole life is built around their love story, they own the bar where they got together. She ends up dying in the end. I loved the entire story. It is beautifully written. I definitely shed a tear because, ouch. I was constantly engaged from the beginning to the end, and it really made me feel the pain of the characters. I don’t think I have any questions right now, aside from the ending. The ending was beautiful and abrupt and tragic, and I love that, it is just like how he describes his heart breaking. My question though is do you think that extending the ending slightly would possibly add to the drama at the end? It could add more weight and gravity. But overall it was beautiful, and I loved it.
