The story is about a girl mentally battling her fear as she prepares to bridge jump. I absolutely love your writing style, you have a really beautiful way of describing things in a way that shows me what is happening rather than simply telling me what is happening. I love the ending and how you wrapped all of it up, the only thing I found slightly confusing was the jump to talking about her teacher in school in the beginning, it felt a little out of place to me.
