It is an interaction between two people in a very complicated relationship/friendship scenario and it ends up being a figment of her imagination allowing her to finally let go. I absolutely loved it. Not only was it written in such a way that was easy to understand and interact with the characters, but it’s also really impressive how well you can feel the characters emotions even though it is written in the third person. When the interaction ended up being completely in her head???? Are you kidding???? Actual goose bumps. I want to know more about what he is thinking and feeling, I know it’s from her perspective, but as a reader I’d like to know. I genuinely have no critiques, which I know is extremely unhelpful, but I love the way it is written now and I don’t see anything that needs to be altered. This piece is very easy, as a college student, to relate to as it takes place at our age group and is likely something we have all experienced at least partly.
