This is a story about the sun and moon being star crossed lovers. They turn into humans and meet one another and then are torn apart again by their responsibilities. I loved the story. It was such a creative idea and it had me deeply invested throughout the entire story. I found myself feeling the emotions of the characters and also feeling the disappointment at the ending as they did as well. I would like to know where the idea came from. I also want to know the importance of the man. Is there a deeper meaning behind him? Or is he simply just a man that lives in the woods? My only suggestion would be to possibly shorten the ending. They don’t actually meet or interact until page 8. I understand the building of tension, but it is definitely a long build up.
