This is a story about the sun and moon being star crossed lovers.  They turn into humans and meet one another and then are torn apart again by their responsibilities.  I loved the story.  It was such a creative idea and it had me deeply invested throughout the entire story.  I found myself feeling the emotions of the characters and also feeling the disappointment at the ending as they did as well.  I would like to know where the idea came from.  I also want to know the importance of the man.  Is there a deeper meaning behind him?  Or is he simply just a man that lives in the woods?  My only suggestion would be to possibly shorten the ending.  They don’t actually meet or interact until page 8.  I understand the building of tension, but it is definitely a long build up.