This is a story about a guy and a girl who are friends but both have feelings for one another even though the guy is in a long term relationship. It gets really complicated, and then he ends up breaking it off to be with his friend in the end. I really liked the development of the story as it went along. I liked the introduction of the roommates and how realistic that was. I also really liked how easy it was to read, it was very much a type of story that I would gravitate towards on my own. I don’t have many questions aside from do you think it would have been beneficial for us to learn a little more about the girlfriend? I feel like that could have added more depth to the story. I would suggest adding some possible interactions between the girl and her roommates. As a reader I would be curious to see how they react to the whole situation between her and the guy.
